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N/A you should hear the songs lone live better than revenge & the story of us by Taylor swift awesome songs!!!!

Disclaimer:
Me: do I really have to do the disclaimer
Fang: no they should already know
Max: I know you don't even write like him
Me: wow thanks
Max: just being honest

Chapter 3: Shopping

Max's Point of View
"Okay were going to split up in groups of 2 so we don't have to be here all day" I said to the flock
"Alright" said Ella
I knew who everyone wanted to go with but I was going to make them have to go with that person …by chose
"Okay then me and fang are a group" I said
"I will go with Ella" said iggy turning to look at her and they walked off
"Okay whose next wait were not even okay how about nudge you and angel go together and gazzy can go with us" I said
"Um actually I would rather go with them so I don't have to watch you guys make kissy face"
"Fine" I said and took fangs hand and headed off
"So we're do you want to go" fang asked me
"Umm well I was thinking we could just be together" I said trying to get out of shopping but failed
"You really hate shopping" he said chuckling
"Shut up I just don't get the point I mean really all you do is look for clothes to make you look nicer" I said
"Plus I would rather be doing this" I said and went on my tippy toes to kiss him
Fang kissed me back his tongue begging to come inside Fang's kiss was gentle and sweet, loving and caring. We kissed for a good 10 minutes
When he said "we should go shopping"
"Why" I whispered right into his mouth
"Because you're going to need something nice to wear for Ella's birthday" he said into my hair
I pulled back "SHIT! I forgot I didn't get her anything" I said
"Well we still have 1 hour" fang said checking his watch
Gazzy Point of View
"ohh can we go to Hollister pleasseee" Nudge begged
Nudge look so beautiful I couldn't tell her a and I mean it I would have rather been fighting erasers than shopping with my little sister and the love of my life
"Yeah please Gazzy" angels asked and added don't forget to make your move
"Okay" I said and followed Nudge inside were she ran to some colorful skirts
"Look gazzy isn't this to die for do you think it would look nice on me" she said holding up the skirt
"You look good in anything" I said honestly and I saw her blush
And that's when I grabbed her hand she looked at me and smiled I guess I did right and I smiled back
Good job Gazzy angel said watching us from behind a clothes rack

Ella Point of View
"So what do you want your birthday" iggy said as we walked to Wet Seal
"Umm anything I guess" I said
"Helpful Thanks" iggy said sarcastically
"Well I am sure anything you get me I will love" I said trying to give a hint
But then again iggy wouldn't take a hint if I throw it right in front of him
Then there was an awkward silence
"So why did you wanted to shop with me why not the flock?" I asked trying to break the silence and wanting him so badly to make his move
"Uh yeah well I thought it would be better than shopping with Angel and Nudge and I couldn't go with gazzy because he was going to make his move on nudge today" he said as we walked into wet seal
"Oh" I said a little bit upset I really thought he liked m-
"And I also didn't want to do this in front of everyone else" he said and leaned in to kiss me he kissed really good for someone who has never kissed anyone in his life
He moved his head to the side more so we could kiss deeper and I did the same.
Then he pulled back and said "Ella will you be my girlfriend"
"OMG OMG YES I WILL!!!!" I said and jumped into his arms to hug him and saw him smiling down at me and I smiled back
N/A   SORRY IT'S SHORT!!! I need ideas review and tell me what you want to see in the story and any ideas or anything but make sure you REVIEW!!!!!
  • Listening to: Tattoo & Break Even
  • Reading: Maximum Ride

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